Monday, 13 November 2023

Power to the People Project - Our question: How could Energy Usage in Ōtaki homes be more efficient? - Group: James, Violet and Rakei. (Week 5

 So far our group has been working well on our project, we've almost finished our presentation by researching our question on "How could Energy Usage in Ōtaki homes be more efficient?"

Me, Violet, and Rakei are now working on researching a little more information for our Presentation.

1. What have you achieved/learned/found out since your last post?: I found out more about the amount of energy being used at home by certain electronics.


2. How effectively have you used your time this week?: Okay, we managed to do most of our slideshow and get started on the house model in Planner 5d.


3. How have you contributed to your group’s progress?: I have been working on the house model and have helped with some of the research for the slideshow.


4. Glows: something that is going well in your project: Our model


5. Grows: Something you need to work on: Making the model better.


6. Where could you get help with this?: From Violet and from Rakei, for some new ideas.


7. What are the next steps for your project?: Making the model better with progress and finishing up little bits of our presentation.

Thursday, 26 October 2023

My Essay on "Night" by Elie Wiesel


Final Essay - Extended Written Text - Night


Describe at least one important technique used in the text. 

Explain how the technique created an emotional response in you.


In the Holocaust memoir ‘Night’ by Elie Wiesel, we are introduced to his life and time during World War II, when he was imprisoned in the infamous concentration camp, Auschwitz. I was emotionally impacted by three major events that were told throughout the story. These events were Elie watching the burning children’s bodies, the hanging of the Pipel, and the prisoners fighting in the cattle cars for bread. The writer uses a range of language features, including sibilance, repetition, and descriptive verbs, to describe his experiences in the concentration camp. Elie Wiesel’s purpose in writing this memoir was to tell his story and educate people on how awful the concentration camps were.



One event that impacted me emotionally was Elie’s first night in camp, where he watched the guards burn the bodies of children, toddlers, and babies in a pit of fire. The Author used the technique of sibilance, this is the repeated use of the s sound “Never shall I forget that smoke. Never shall I forget the small faces of the children whose bodies I saw transformed into smoke under a silent sky.”

This gave the poem more rhythm and helped it flow more, helping the poem create a larger emotional impact on the reader. This event impacted me emotionally, making me feel sorrow and sadness for Elie and the children’s families, watching and knowing they will never see their loved ones again. It also shocked me that the guards could do such terrible things to innocent people, let alone children.



Another event that impacted me emotionally was the hanging of the Pipel. This sentence used the technique of repetition. This is when a word or words are repeated, “But the third rope was still moving: the child, too light, was still breathing...” This technique emphasised how the boy was still alive and suffering. This made me feel sorry for the boy, who had to endure the pain and agony of being hung, unlike the adults whose necks were snapped and were killed instantly.



A final event that impacted me emotionally was when the prisoners fought in the cattle cars for bread. This text used descriptive verbs, “Soon, pieces of bread were falling into the wagons from all sides. And the spectators observed these emaciated creatures ready to kill for a crust of bread.”. This gave me a better visualisation of what was happening and how hungry these prisoners were. The event made me feel enraged that the spectators were throwing bread into the cattle cars, to watch them fight for their amusement, treating them like they were trash and less than human.


After reading this book, it has given me a larger understanding of what life was like in the concentration camps, and overall during the holocaust. The event that I feel emotionally impacted me the most was the hanging of the Pipel. I believe this affected me the most because he was only a child and the suffering and torture he had to endure was disgusting. I hope that after others have read this book too, they also gain a better understanding of how bad Hitler and the Nazis were. 


Tuesday, 1 August 2023

The Jewish People and the Jewish Religion

In English we watched two videos about Judaism (the Jewish Religion) and the Jewish people.


Some things I found out were The Kosher diet, The synagogue.


One thing I thought was interesting was the kosher diet that Jewish people follow and the certain

things they can and can't eat. Also how animals you can eat must be killed in a certain way for

it to be Kosher.


I would like to find out more about is the Kosher diet.

Elie Wiesel, Author of Night, Pages 3-5 Empathy Map

 Our English class is studying the memoir Night, by Holocaust survivor Elie Wiesel. 


I worked in a group with Violet to create an Empathy Map for Elie at this age.



In this part of the book I think Elie was happy studying the Zohar with Moishe the Beadle. I think he was kind of annoyed with his dad not letting him study the Zohar because he was too young. But then I think he forgived him when he started studying it with Moishe.

Tuesday, 4 April 2023

My Photo Collage

 In English we made photo collages about our favourite things.  The categories were our favourite colour, animal, plant tree or flower, favourite body of water, season, and time of day. 

This is my collage:

 


We also had to do some writing about why we chose these images.

Why I have chosen these photos. My first image is of the colour red. I chose this colour because it is my favourite colour and it has always been for my whole life. My second image is my time of day and it is midnight. I chose this because I love how peaceful and quiet it is. Another thing I love about midnight is how cold it is and when you breathe the air feels fresh.


My third image is of my favourite plant and mine is the lily of the valley. It has poisonous berries and it can cause skin irritation and rash if you touch it. They are mostly found in the northern hemisphere across Asia and Europe. My Fourth image is my favourite season and I chose winter. I like how cold it is and you can snuggle up in a blanket and read a book or just watch some tv. I also love snow but sadly we don't really get that in New Zealand. 

My next image is of my favourite animal, a dog. I love dogs because they are adorable and are fun to be around. You can snuggle up with them and give them pats. I also chose a greyhound because that is the same breed my dog is and has slowly become my favourite breed. My final photo is of a river and it is my favourite body of water. I like this form of water because it is fun to swim in and try and go against the current and try to get up stream.

 


Wednesday, 15 March 2023

Sad Joke on a Marae - Personal Response - James Auld

In English we read a poem called Sad Joke on a Marae by Apirana Taylor. This poem is about a man who didn't learn about his culture whilst growing up and the only Maori he knew was Tihei Mauriora. Sad Joke on a Marae by Apirana Taylor  

Personal Response






 


Wednesday, 22 February 2023

Te Tiriti o Waitangi as a Wave

 


              I personally see myself as the person on the hill. I think this because I see it            as an issue but there are also other issues in the country.